&*^%$#

this is my first one in a long time... It Sucks
Any suggestions?

V1


V2


V3


V4

[crait]

I personally like the second one better.
They kinda remind me of dark vista.

I like the second one the most as well, the text is leet.

thanks....
nothing i need to improve on?

[crait]

The text is too sharp.
It sticks out too much, in my opinion.

V2 ftw, text is great

you need to work on better depth and stronger lighting. You have a lot of lighting going on and it just looks out of shape. Text looks pretty good though. At the moment, I don't like any of the versions that you have up there right now.