Rate:Pirate without a sky

Tinkering with layers


Comments appreciated!

nice could work on the text and try to blend the render in a bit more...
nice colors could use a few more effects keep it up
maybe lessen the light source right in the middle and put some to the left and right

over all 8.6/10

Good effects
Good use of C4D

Bad Text
Not the best blending for you're render

Overall: 7.1/10

**********I wont commment on the c4ds...you know how i feel about those...

For the sig, very very good depth, try adding a light source, and work on that text...

Nice Job overall thou

ya you should add a v 2 or somthing with some or all of these suggestions

I added the C4d because the sig was just missing something, and that was the only thing I could think of throwing in.

7.5/10