I think the third is ok but like vault said you could have created crisper angles by holding the shift button while drawing your lines. If you havent submitted already, you might consider making the heads a bit smaller and adding some other kind of effects to the image going on around them. Maybe fix the blending as well. The rest of them your borders need to meet the edges of your characters.
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